Selasa, 13 April 2010

Unforgettable moment

Unforgettable moment with my friends

At the time of the semester's holiday, precisely in December last year. I feel very happy and pleasant because soon we welcome the birth Jesus Christ or Christmas. My friends and I were very enthusiastic welcome that day. And yesterday's accidental vacation long enough and long distance with the memorial day of Christmas. So, we get used to tour before we busy for the preparation exercises, such as band, vocal group, drama, and other activities to welcome Christmas day in church. We feel very happy because the tour is held can be followed by all young people who happened off the same church.
We also visited attractions in Kaliurang, the beautiful place no far from Klaten. We were twenty four people and left by using four cars. We all felt like a lunatic in the car because we were singing, shouting, and chatted. We can feel the sense of togetherness that we rarely get. Our journey toward Kaliurang accompanied by rain and we got there at afternoon. Our journey to Kaliurang takes about two hours.
We went straight to our lodgings in the House Omah Jawi. In there, I went straight go to bed bacause quite tired of driving. My short break to eliminate fatigue. At the time of the afternoon, we shared a trip to Telogo Ayu. Inside there attractions, there are many funny monkeys that like my fiends. We strongly feel the atmosphere of a peaceful, comfortable, and cool air in it as well because trees were large enough and a large yard for us to sit together. Not least, there is also the waterfall, which adds a wonderful atmosphere to take photos. And time went dusk, we were back to the House Omah Jawi to break.
The event was followed the next day after breakfast. We entered the park playing out bond located in Kaliurang. But before the show outbond at the start Christian's fellowship together in the park. Because it was still morning, plus the atmosphere is still quiet, beautiful plants and the surrounding air is very cool. Our Christian's fellowship of sharing and getting srious about singing religiuos song. Completed the Christian's fellowship, we all felt fresh mind and spirit back to do activities. And we continue to outbond, here we were taught to cooperation, concentration, togetherness and others. I am very satisfied because we were hard to come together and once we gathered directly organized the event which will teach us a tremendous togetherness. That's all makes us all better understand how important of togetherness.

7 komentar:

  1. yupp. .
    togetherness is the most important thing in our life. .
    without togetherness, our life is empty. .
    Am I right?

    BalasHapus
  2. I just think that you are so religious...hehehe...

    BalasHapus
  3. Ulis@;,..you're right guys...hehe,..I think so

    You did@;,..Thank you,...because without love from God,our life would be useless....hahaha...

    BalasHapus
  4. I agree with you You Did and Okta...
    I hope you will be one of the Saints in heaven someday... :D

    BalasHapus
  5. Hi Wilda!!Nice to read your story. It seems that you really enjoy holiday, right?
    Do you know what? When I had an activity in Kaliurang, I also stayed in Omah Jawi. It is such a nice and hommy place, isn’t it?

    Here, I have few comments on your work:
    And yesterday's accidental vacation long enough and long distance with the memorial day of Christmas this is not a sentence Wilda because there is no Verb in it.
    So, we get used to tour before....  So, we had a tour before....

    We feel very happy because the tour is held can be followed by all young people who happened off the same church.  We felt very happy because the tour is followed by..........

    We were twenty four people and left by using four cars.  use “went” instead of “left”.....We went there by car.

    there are many funny monkeys that like my friends. (hehe...are you sure? If you write like that, it means that the monkeys love your friends. If you want to say that they are similar with your friends there are many funny monkeys that are like my friends.)

    Please mind the tense, if it is an experience and it has already happen, so you must use Past tense. I still found Present tense in your work, it’s better to check it again, Ok?

    Remember, wilda! To- must be followed by Verb1, so “here we were taught to cooperation, concentration, togetherness and others” should be “here we were taught to cooperate, concentrate...”

    I still found some grammatical mistakes in your work. So if you don’t mind, please revise it again, Ok? Fight! Fight!...(^^)9

    BalasHapus
  6. okay...thank you for your suggestion...hehe,..I will try to revise again.

    BalasHapus